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I know what you mean, jellyfish just look really cool and space-y, why not put them in space? These guys look really cool floating in front of that cloud...
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As for critique I have to points. Firstly, whereas the clouds are overall very good and the overall impression is very clear, there are some parts which are less clear when looking at the details. I know clouds lit up by sunlight can seem to have very clear edges from a distance, but the light in the upper left edge seems very even to me. It's certainly possible for clouds to randomly look like this, but I think you could clarify this by breaking up the edge considerably (you might even consider letting light travel through the clouds to partially light the shadow side here and there). Likewise the "valley" formed in the clouds in the center of the image is fine (suggests some sort of inversion effect?) but I feel the "ridge" to the right is a bit too even and straight to really convey the cloudy impression.
From a compositional point of view, you might also want to consider -not- letting the closest jellyfish's tail escape the frame of the picture. We know it ends just below it - this is made apparent by the more distant jellyfish - but letting the tendrils end in-frame will further add to the alien floathing effect I think you are aiming for.
... but overall this is really nit-picking and I had to look quite closely before finding valid points of critique on this one. Very good job overall!
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